2011년 12월 11일 일요일

Nearing the end of this class......

   




"Time flies"



I can't believe that this class will be soon finished. Through this class, my writing ability has improved than before.
     Above all, my writing has been organized. Before, I just considered making structure; introduction, body, conclusion. I didn't know that what is hook and thesis, restate. But, now, I mind to hook and thesis and I try to make more interesting introduction. I think my introduction has developed. As well, my body paragraphs have been clear because of learning sequence connectors. However, I'm still difficult to write conclusion paragraph. I'll need to practice to make more clear conclusion. Through this class, my basic writing structure is not changed but, each paragraph has been more clear and detail.

In the future, on the basis of learning the essay process by this class, I'll practice to make clear conclusion continuously. And I'd like to take a TOEIC WRITING examination. The challenge may be interesting.
This class was really useful to me.  Thank U for teaching me, Sarah!